I put this promo together and am asking for your critique....

Howdy,
I just put this promo together (link at bottom of this post) and am wondering what you think of it so that it can be more effective as I'm new to promoting online. The 2 programs at the top are the very best I've found yet for getting website traffic which equates to making money online and the other is a killer for learning eBay and both have great affiliate programs plus tons of freebies that you may be interested in.
Plus, below that is my offer on Kiosks which I manufacture and have a Special on for the next week.
What do you think is the fastest way to sell the Kiosks? All were doing so far is offering $100.00 Cash for anyone to forward the promo on and however many sell than the person that forwarded it get's $100.00 Cash Per unit. Eg. If you forward to your people and 6 get sold you get $600.00.
Here's the link:
http://www.eta.ca/webs/00071/pop.htm
Your thoughts or tips would be awesome!
Have a super Day!
Chad.

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